Hi Cullai, Great work on writing your story. I like how you could tell us so much of the details, with what the brothers were saying and doing. Your story has a great beginning introducing who is in the story, and middle where they are talking about what they will do, and ending with what happens and how they feel. Well Done. I'd love a picture to go with it :) From Mrs Forbes
Hi Cullai, Great work on writing your story. I like how you could tell us so much of the details, with what the brothers were saying and doing. Your story has a great beginning introducing who is in the story, and middle where they are talking about what they will do, and ending with what happens and how they feel. Well Done. I'd love a picture to go with it :)
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